the main street garden beds
of any small, tidy town
become the ultimate metonym for perfection
and their riot of marigolds and daisies
do seem to lift spirits
and so the place is crowded at lunch time:
across from me an old sparky
eats a salad roll
wrapped in that classic, white paper bag,
carrot shavings
and beetroot stains on his knuckles
accessorising ‘thin’ with a possible tank top
and a pair of hip bones,
a girl and her date skip lunch
skip conversation and get right to the point
walking her poodle across
a new green-uniform lawn,
with the poor thing held hostage
in a rock-climbing harness,
a short woman attempts dignity
and stuffed into the main street is a swathe
of boats, caravans and four-wheel-drives,
lines of them like transient vines of shining steel
that hem the garden and leave behind
the oxygen of their dollars.

I love the everyday feel of this and particularly the images of the sparky
I’ve been working this one over a bit to try and keep is casual-feeling, very nice to hear it’s got that ‘everyday’ thing!
I can relate to that Ashley – from a transient perspective.
Thanks, Brad – and you’ve actually been through that very main street too!
Wonderful imagery, Ash, it’s great to stop and just watch, people can be interesting in activities they don’t even think about themselves.
Yes! It’s actually something that perhaps gives me some guilt – the writer’s status as voyeur I guess, or at least, ‘thief’ in that, we take what we see and reassemble it for our purposes. But I certainly agree, it’s highly interesting for me to see these low-key moments
[...] Once walked alone out early one day, [...]
Classic Ashley. It’s good to come back to this one (via Mark William Jackson’s link). I remember reading it when you posted it and love the crowded at lunchtime feel. Love the old sparky with the carrot and beetroot stains on his knuckles.
He’s a pretty vivid memory actually, he was really enjoying his meal, but not in an over the top Homer Simpson way. More enjoying the time to stop and relax I think, thanks Andrew