Florence Haiku Sequence

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blood orange
in small plastic cups
green fields blur

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sidewalk café
crowded with the
swell of English accents

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miniatures
in the souvenir shop
the fan droops

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trimming mat board
with borrowed scissors
Dr Conrad squirms

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to climb the Duomo
and breathe in the whole city
– graffiti

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frozen white
David’s too-large-hands
towering over us

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4 responses to “Florence Haiku Sequence”

  1. Vivid and wonderful! Great stuff.

  2. Hi Ashley, I read your first ku a number of different ways. It’s my favourite. The last line gives me actual green fields or another texture/colour in the cup. Love it.
    Andrew

    1. Hi, Andrew – thank you! Really glad to hear that one worked, I’d hoped it’d be read either way and I always worry about the ku I write that sort of pivot around the middle line, but this one feels like it works

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