7 thoughts on “a haiku

    • Thanks, Dhyan!
      Normally it would be, but the verse isn’t very traditional in terms of 5-7-5, I think I wanted to use the ‘shadows’ as a more negative image but also to indicate the plural.

      what about

      “a shadow on the courthouse
      shouting over the pram”

      ?

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