Cordite ‘Toil’ Subs Close Tomorrow

Subs for Cordite’s Toil issue are closing tomorrow at midnight, so if you haven’t already maybe check your folders for some great poetry you might have on a pretty classic theme.

I’ve thrown my hat in this time (with what I hope are a couple of strong pieces) because the theme really appeals to me – probably because I think all writing is a particular form of toil – whether it’s mental toil or maybe back or wrist pain 🙂



The Poet (or artist) As Re-organiser – What’s Originality?

“Good artists borrow. Great artists steal,” – a quote attributed to Pablo Picasso but which may in fact be someone else’s.

Part 1

Are writers and artists among the greatest of thieves? It’s not only a post-structuralist notion to challenge ideas of ‘creativity’ and ‘originality’ but Roland Barthes’ notion of all (written) works being “a tissue of citations”[1]  is one of my favourites. To re-phrase, all works are the sum of their many influences.

It seems obvious that what we do as artists (not just writers and poets) is collect and re-organise existing ideas. Neil Gaiman’s fantastic novel The Graveyard Book (2009) takes a baby and plunges it into a graveyard to be raised by ghosts – with a clear and loving nod to Rudyard Kipling’s Jungle Book. Obviously a ‘fish-out-of-water’ setting was not new in Kipling’s time either, which is just the point. How many truly new ideas exist? And do we have to spend so much time looking for them?

I think that when someone writes about the ‘originality’ of a text, it’s a comment on one of two things – either the author’s ability to dissect then re-present existing ideas, or that author’s ability to mask the source texts. Or both. Another point can be drawn from this – a reader’s notion of just what is original is dependent on their cultural-literacy: if a youngster in the 1990s is blown away by Disney’s The Lion King (1994) and then comes across Kimba the White Lion (1965) years later, then that youngster will obviously have a different view of the originality of the 1994 text.

This from T.S. Elliot:

“Immature poets imitate; mature poets steal; bad poets deface what they take, and good poets make it into something better, or at least something different. The good poet welds his theft into a whole of feeling which is unique, utterly different than that from which it is torn; the bad poet throws it into something which has no cohesion. A good poet will usually borrow from authors remote in time, or alien in language, or diverse in interest.” [2]

So the way each individual interprets and re-organises existing ideas is unique – based on their environment, experiences and cultural literacy (and anything else lying around) – and so different individuals ought to come up with or create different works.

Writers gather a truly astonishing collage of source material from which to draw inspiration – and obviously not simply from printed text. Artwork, music, film, conversation and the seasons are a few of my favourites. But they only make up a short list which is still too short. (So I’m probably better off just saying ‘anything’ could inspire us.) So whatever this ‘anything’ that inspires or moves us can be our source, and creativity is what we do with it all. The same could be argued about game shows – they reward knowledge but not the application of it. The end result of fantastic writing (painting, composing or playing etc) is the evidence of how an individual applied knowledge of their influences to whatever piece they’d been working on at that time.

To repeat my main point – we’re re-organisers – I’ve just done it here with this post. I’ve taken words, ideas, quotes and thoughts from at the least the following: Barthes, Elliot, Kipling, Gaiman, Tezuka and Picasso to name only some of the names I’m personally aware of. My contribution to the process was to re-organise them to fit my purposes – a discussion of the topic for this article. And what makes this an act of creation – is that I’ve come up with something different (or new) to everyone else who has access to the same sources and has approached the same topic. (Or so I hope.)  The thing is another writer and I wouldn’t approach the same sources and the same topic in the same way.

It might seem a mercenary way to think about writing – that all we do is sneak off with little bits of the best things other people have done and mutate it in order to fit our desires. But it isn’t a grimy thing at all –it’s amazing. We’re lucky. Everyday we’re given the chance to work with the greatest art our world has produced – we can draw from thousands and thousands of years worth of brilliant ideas and only benefit from it.

I suppose the vast majority of us aren’t the greatest of thieves at all – because we don’t truly steal unless we re-present someone else’s work, whole, as our own.

Part 2

And that’s one reason why the Cordite Creative Commons issue is so exciting, what makes the ‘cut-up’ so interesting, because authorship is subverted. Ideas are re-organised and re-presented. This time however, the sources are readily available and often acknowledged during and after production (dare I use that word.)

As one of the things Authorship is based on is the ownership of material, a remix of a work is troubling from a legal standpoint, which is concerned with the protection of individuals. Part of authorship is about the right to be identified as the ‘creator’ or ‘owner’ of some artistic material. Or at least, some created material. And it’s the right of a single person to be known as that author. So when we remixed each others’ work, who could later claim the badge of Author for a particular piece?

Based on my ramblings in Part 1 – we’re doing the same thing artists have been doing for countless years. But here, instead of re-organising ideas, themes and images (our influences) we’re doing it to lines of poetry. We’re re-organising discrete pieces of an artwork.

So in the Cordite issue, it’s the same as in the music world. We’re sampling, but we’re the ones physically and mentally doing that re-arranging, doing the thinking behind it, the testing, discarding, changing, augmenting etc and so without joint authorship, it probably is the individual who was the ‘Author.’

Perhaps I am the ‘Author’ of this


However, I certainly couldn’t have put this piece together without great source material in the first place. And I wouldn’t like to say I am Author without a ‘but’ thrown in…

And that’s why it’s a good idea to surround ourselves with the best sources of inspiration, as if we’re able, we can put the sum of our influences into something interesting, something effective, and on some levels, quite different, rather than completely original. And that’s ok. You don’t have to come up with something new to communicate effectively.

And there’s another reason to be honest about ideas of ‘originality’ –  because if you’re aware of what you do during the creative process, then you’re far less likely to violate it.



[1] Barthes, Roland, (1967) The Death of the Author, Apsen, no5+6

[2] Eliot, T.S., (2000) “Philip Massinger,” The Sacred Wood, New York:

Tiggy Johnson – First Taste

(Semi-recently) I was lucky enough to be involved with the publication of page seventeen editor Tiggy Johnson‘s first poetry collection, quite fittingly entitled ‘First Taste.’

It was fantastic to be involved with these poems, with a collection Graham Nunn says is ‘brimming with domestic luminosity‘ and I do agree. The poems in First Place reveal an unapologetic struggle with motherhood, a forthright engagement with the issues around parenthood and a powerful directness. Just check out ‘The Facts’ or ‘Shopping for Girls’ at Verity La.

In other instances the collection shows real tenderness in ‘Solitaire‘ and in ‘Concluding,’ or takes a sly look at the past.  There’s much more to enjoy, right down to a brilliant cover design by Jenny Chapman.

If you’re around Brisbane this Sunday, visit her at the Speedpoets gig:

SpeedPoets, Sunday September 5, 2:00pm – 5:30pm, InSpire Gallery Bar – 71 Vulture St. West End


Tiggy Johnson, Randall Stephens & Andy White


2010 SpeedPoets Open Mic Competition

Entry is a gold coin donation

“Loki” at Cordite #33 – Creative Commons

While I’ve been working on the Cordite zombie renga, a whole issue has come and gone, and now the new one is up, and it’s a danm exciting one. One of my poems, Loki is featured which is always a thrill – but the best bit with this issue, is that it’s remixable – much like the  Custom / Made issue a little while back.

This means, to quote:

Cordite 33: Creative Commons contains thirty-three poems (okay, thirty four, but one of them’s an image), plus a wealth of feature material. But that’s not the end of it. In the spirit of Creative Commons, we’ve decided to make the poems in the issue available as downloadable Word and text documents.

We ‘d therefore like to invite you to download the issue and start remixing. You don’t need two turntables or a microphone, just a text editing programme and sense of creativity. You can edit and re-arrange the poems in any way you see fit.

Perhaps you’d like to take a line from each poem and construct your own meta-poem. Perhaps you’d like to cut every second word and see what you’re left with. We could go on, but don’t want to pre-empt your remixes too much!

As there’s no sound in a vacuum, we’re very interested in seeing the results of your efforts. For this reason, we’re now accepting submissions for Cordite 33.1: The Remixes, which we hope will eventually contain a whole bunch of remixes, from both contributors to the issue and readers.

Please send your remixes to with the word ‘Remix’ in the subject line. Remember to attach your submission as a Word or RTF document. We’ll be accepting submissions throughout the month of August – this means that the deadline for submissions is midnight on 31 August 2010.

So what are you waiting for? Download and get cracking!

David Prater and team have been busy pushing boundaries for a time now, certainly more than many publications, and in doing so, have been opening up poetry in satisfyingly collaborative ways. And why shouldn’t they? There should only be a certain amount of static elements to an online journal – new technology enbables too much potential for that that technology to go unexplored.

Can’t wait to see where they take it next!

Cordite, Zombies Launch! New Renku

With the launch of the new issue, Cordite is unleashing zombies across the land!

The issue, edited by Ivy Alvarez, features a wealth of material from a host of writers (I wonder if ‘host’ is the right collective noun for zombies?) and I’ve barely scratched the surface – and personally I’m pretty happy to announce the following 3 things: my poem man about town is featured, along with an article that I co-wrote with Graham Nunn The Death of Poetry in Australian Classrooms.

Lastly, I was lucky enough to be offered the role of ‘sabaki’ or leader by David Prater, for the new renku at Cordite, the Zombie Haikunaut Renga! If you like haiku and renga, please jump on over and submit, we’re open to all, and it’s going to be a really interesting, modern renku.

Here’s a link to some guidelines I set up, hope to see you there!

Zombie Renga Instructions

‘Cook’ at Cordite

Had a poem (‘cook’) accepted over at Cordite – the poetry journal responsible for inspiring Issa’s Snail with it’s amazing interactive renku – & a second, ‘like knots…’

Have a look – the issue is amazing – it has one side of poems dealing with the theme ‘custom,’ and one with ‘made’. ‘Made’ includes a series of cut-ups and ‘made’ poems by the authors of the issue, where we each took snippets of other writers’ work and made a new poem, it was great fun.

Cook at Cordite